It was a rainning day in the stone age and a there is cleaver boy call Arg, he was told that when thunder come is the end of the world but after every time the world never end so one day he went out and made sothing to protect him from the rain and he called it underella. When he went out he saw a Quetzalcoatlus come down fast toward Arg and grabed Arg then took Arg back to the nest but on the way the Quetzalcoatlus got stiked by lighting and Arg fell into another nest and inside there was a velocitchy raptor and became friend then the Quetzalcoatus came back to get him back but Arg saw a hole and went into it, It lead to the other side of the mountain, Arg grad two big leaf and jumped off the mountain. Arg flew back to home.
I like how he was the most cleaver.
I didn't like anything
I will recommand it because it is all about problme soving
Jiale, When you repeat the same name in a sentence it doesn't sound right. There are a couple of extremely long sentences that need to be broken up. If you read it aloud and just have 1 or 2 ideas in each sentence.
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